Icefur and Goldenheart

Icefur strolled into camp. He grabbed a rabit from the freash kill pile. Fernpaw walked up to Icefur. "Were d-did you go?" she mewed.

"Oh, your back. Can you find anything wrong with Fernheart? She's been looking for you." Goldenheart padded up to Icefur.

"Fernheart? Do you mean Fernpaw?" Icefur meowed.

( Do you want to say Fernpaw is Goldenheart's and Icefur's kit?"

"Woops, I'm sorry. I just woke up from a nap. Must have been that mouse I ate that was brought in like 3 days ago."

(are you serious?)

"Ok, what is wrong with Fernpaw?" Goldenheart sat down and waited for a reply. "I have to go, she ran to the nursery."

ooc; Yup

Icefur got to his paws. "Why don't we go get some herbs?" he meowed.

Goldenheart walked into the medicine den. "One of the kits has a cold. I guess they were playing in that puddle that was supposed to be dried beside the nursery. If no one else will dry, I will do it myself." She padded over to get some moss and left for the puddle.

Goldenheart padded wairly into the medicine den. She was exahsted and covered in mud. "Have the elders been fed yet?" She asked stuffley.

"Fernpaw is hunting with Brihtstar." Icefur meowed.

"Ok. Is this just a hunting party with Brightstar, or anything, you know?"

(Brightstar, are you ever going to reply to this topic?)

(Brightstar? I need Icefur in here. Have u ever heard of a father who just ignores all the time? well u prob have but still)

(Sorry, it's school. My computer is beeing crazy, and I have alot to do. I will try to get on every day OK?)

Icefur meowed "It's just her and Thornfur... I-I think." he meowed..

( Oh so sorry, I didn't know. I should have known, my compititions just started. We got 2 new people. They had to quit and the wanted to stay in. They joined are's because we had to quit to, and know we are not quiting!)
"Oh," she said expectantly. "looks like we are out of comfry" she mumbled, you could barley understand her. "dirtbags take her out of training just to hunt! hmph. I never stopped training" Goldenheart practicaly thoughtl. All anyone else heard was "mmtr sta fbadsf"

"Are you OK mommy?" Fernpaw asked nervously.

"OH!" Goldenheart jumped up in surprise. "Uh, yeah. We need comfry sweety. You wanna come out with me? I will be right back. Go help your father and check if there are any other herbs we need to stock up on.

"Er... How about just you and I and Fernpaw go out and hunt?" Icefur meowed. FFernpaw nodded and shot into the forest. Icefur ran after her. "OWWW! AHH!" Icefur yowled in pain. "Mommy! daddy is hurt!" Fernpaw yowled.

"What was that?" Goldenheart didn't really understand yet that they ran out of the den. She started walking towards the enterance of camp. "Where did you guys go?"

"Mom dad is in a fow trap! He isn't breathing!" Fernpaw burst into the clearing, "Hurry!"

"WHAT! WE NEED... WE NEED... HELP!" She ran out of the clearing and went to Icefur. "Get a stick, a stick, thats what we need! Right?" She looked around franticly. "Fernpaw! Go get a stick!" Goldenheart had kept a small supply of herbs in small cracks and holes all over WindClan territory. She rushed to the closest one and grabbed a mouthfull of herbs.

Fernpaw grabbed a stick in her jaws, not knowing what to do, she placed it next to her dyeing father. Icefur opened his mouth and spoke: "Goldenheart, you have been the best friend I have ever had... Fernpaw, Please... That care of your slef and become the strongest warrior." Icefur twitched and went limp. "M-mom will d-daddy live?" Fernpaw mewed, fight back tears. "Th-this has been a great life... Im glad it was me who was punished and not one of you..." Icefur mewed, barly a whisper. Tallstar, one of the oldest leaders, stepped down out of the sky. He sadly looked at Icefur. "I did not was this to happen." His deep voice meowed. "But it must." Icefur's soul started to rise and when it did, he looked around. "Please tallstar... Give my family a chance to grow close." icefur meowed. "I am sorry. I have no controll over this. I have just come to take you to starclan." Tallstart meowed. Fernpaw's face when Emotionless, not knowing to be mad, or sad, or whatever. She ran up to Icefur's soul. "D-da-daddy! Don't leave!!!" Fernpaw bursst into tears and she fell to the ground next to her father's body. Icefur was tearing up and he went to Goldenheart. "I will miss you more tham anything. I will waite for you. Please, take care of Windclan." he meowed, tears dripping off his face.

"NOOOO!" Goldenheart yowled. "You won't have to wait! I'm coming with you! Don't let a stupid fox trap ruin us! Come on! Tallstar! How could you?!" Goldenheart grabbed Fernpaw and cried into her fur. She just screamed.

Tallstar sighed. "This is not my doing." He tryed to meow firmly. But his voice was full of sadness.

(ps. why did u do that Brightstar? It makes a really cool story but that was really disturbing on my part. Well, disturbing is not really the right word.)